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haha get back to this. just dropping in to say i'll love it. dont worry, indepth later - just commenting so i know to come back.

Some of your images are slightly overworn, but others of them - very tattered and tragic. I enjoyed it. The beginning was great, but the way you used the eclipses ...

This certainly had the right touch of ice around it, and I loved how you used to the word "fizz". I suppose it's creative, but it was definitely an attention-grabber. ...

Sometimes I dream that I can smell sea air again – Can taste roses that Melt like sugar in my mouth And your kisses Were never so salty those nights ...

I usually never linger in the lyric poetry section - it highly overrated for me, but I just wanted to check some of your recent stuff out. I enjoyed the ...

Honey, where are you tonight? The stars are aligned and I can feel your fire in my soul. The light show of lovesick lullabies kept me awake for hours - ...

Some lines could be divided into two for the sake of even-ness - for example: and nature lasts until a Boeing trails a reminder overhead of where you are. There ...

All these phrases had a sort of...medical crap....feel to it. I got the feeling, yes, but the phrases were disconnected and ugly. Yes, it suited the topic but I certainly ...

I really liked this. It was a mouthful for so many short lines, but it was packed with meaning. The last line was especially noteworthy, as it changed the attitude ...

I get that it's a form of poetry, but I think one of the major points in list poetry, as i've done it before, is to either use a rhyming ...

Yet when you came -- I cried until I swollen smiles came to my face cut out the "I" right there...I think that's a type. and "came to" could be ...

The first six lines, it looked like you had worked out a rhyme scheme and you were using great lines, ect. ect. But there still is a chance that things ...

Chapter One Jack had grown a lot over the summer, for which he was thankful. He wouldn’t have appreciated going to his new school in Connecticut short and underdeveloped, less ...

See, what I was planning on doing was introducing this aspect and then jumping foward to the main character a handful or so years later, in which this character will ...

This seemed like it should have a rhyme structured - as in, it didn't appear random in many spaces. This is your poem, rhyme wise: (the first stanza has no ...